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Title: Second-hand mobile phone trading market to be regulated
A short comment, but a complete one.
Structural analysis:
Let me talk about the information of second-hand mobile phones first: In the era of mobile Internet, people change their mobile phones more and more frequently, resulting in second-hand mobile phone transactions.
Citing statistics (I wonder how these data are checked): data of people obsolete mobile phones, data of second-hand mobile phone recycling, and data of non-recycling.
The reason why second-hand mobile phones are idle: the data of mobile phones involves personal privacy; the second-hand mobile phone market is not regulated, and the transaction pricing power is in the hands of "scalpers".
Suggestion: Standardize the trading rules of second-hand mobile phones.
Summary of knowledge: Now people are changing their mobile phones more and more frequently, and the elimination rate of mobile phones is getting higher and higher. From 2014 to now, the storage capacity of second-hand mobile phones in my country has exceeded 2 billion, and only 2% of them are recovered from formal channels. (What kind of channel is this official channel?), There are still many second-hand mobile phones that are idle, and there are two reasons for the idle status: one is that mobile phones involve personal privacy, and people don¡¯t know how to deal with them; the other is that transactions are not standardized , The pricing power of the transaction is in the hands of scalpers. Therefore, the suggestion is to regulate the second-hand mobile phone trading market.
Summary: Let¡¯s talk about background information first, second-hand mobile phones, and then data. It seems that data is generally quoted in the second paragraph, the third part analyzes the reasons, and the last paragraph gives suggestions.
The framework can be summed up like this, but it seems useless? What is the core of the application?
Imagine: If I were a reviewer, the process of producing this article could be as follows:
The observed phenomenon is that people change their mobile phones very frequently, and mobile phones are quickly eliminated and become second-hand mobile phones. With so many people in China, there must be a lot of second-hand mobile phones, but there are few formal channels for recycling second-hand mobile phones. There shouldn't be many mobile phones. Baidu, it really is.
After thinking about the reasons, I found that there are two reasons.
Regarding this phenomenon, do you have any good suggestions? make a suggestion.
The core should be: observe a phenomenon worth thinking about, start to think about the cause of the phenomenon, and give some suggestions after thinking about the cause. Therefore, the data in the second paragraph is actually the information that needs to be searched before starting to write the article, as the data to support the comment, but it does not involve the main process of the commentator's thinking.
? About the summary of the writing mode: state the phenomenon + data support + analyze the reasons + suggestions.
Therefore, this is a comment on a noteworthy issue, not a comment guide on hot public opinion.
Title: Calling on Buyers to Enhance Active Confirmation Awareness
This is a comment on something that happened recently.
Structural analysis:
? Summarize the event and say what to discuss;
Analyze the rules of "system default receipt" and the reasons for doing so;
Regarding the active confirmation of receipt, analyze and give suggestions from the perspective of consumers;
? Analyze and give advice from the seller's point of view;
? Analyze and give advice from the perspective of the platform;
?Analyze and give advice from the perspective of the government.
Knowledge summary: The flow of money when buying something from Taobao turns out to be like this: the buyer pays first to the platform, and the money will flow to the seller after the buyer confirms receipt or the system default time is up. The reason for this is to protect the interests of consumers. But this will cause financial problems for the seller: when there are more shipments, there will be financial difficulties because there is no way for the funds to flow back temporarily. And once the buyer confirms the receipt of the goods early, he is worried that it will be difficult to guarantee his own interests, especially when there is no condition of "7 days no reason to return". The solution to this problem seems to be for all parties to increase their sense of responsibility.
Summary: The writing framework of this article is very clear and organized: first explain the incident, then analyze a key part, and then analyze and give suggestions from multiple aspects involved in the incident.
Finally, some of the statements in it involve professional knowledge and professional terms, and I don't understand them very well.
Title: It should be affirmed to be able to take a driver's license at the age of 70
? Comments on social hot spots. This mainly refers to the positive significance of this event.
Structural summary:
The latest news about the driver's license test at the age of 70;
Background information for posting this news: Average life expectancy increased;
Positive meaning;
international precedent;
Positive meaning.
Knowledge summary: The main reason for canceling the 70 age limit for driver's licenses is that China's life expectancy is increasing, and it is also a reflection of the policy's adaptation to social reality. There are also internationalHowever, such precedents also have corresponding measures: different age groups over 70 implement different measures to test the physical health and responsiveness of the elderly to determine whether they can drive safely.
Title: "Can't birds fall on the roof of the Forbidden City?" Don't Mythology Ancient Architecture Culture
This is a comment on the cultural direction, how should I put it? The different orientation of the newspaper is so obvious now.
Structural analysis:
From the overall analysis, the first half is a comment on the roof of the Forbidden City, and the second half is a comment on the rise of the Forbidden City to the entire field of architectural culture. The first half talks about the rumors that no birds fall on the roof of the Forbidden City, and then talks about the video of the rumors, and then analyzes the reasons for the rumors; the second half talks about the phenomenon of people's excessive myths about Chinese ancient architectural culture, and finally gives suggestions: Cultural self-confidence must be established On the basis of correct knowledge and understanding, architectural culture is of course the same.
Knowledge summary: It turns out that the roof of the Forbidden City can drop birds.
Title: Never Let Historical Relics Be Destroyed Under Bulldozers
This is a real review. I feel that the previous reviews were all fake reviews. I just want to make up the number
?The first 3 paragraphs explain the incident: the first paragraph summarizes the matter at a high level, the second paragraph describes the situation of the tomb and the damage, and the third paragraph describes the handling of the relevant personnel.
Following is the comments section. This comment seems to be more inclined to personal opinion and free play of logic. First, analyze on the basis of the Cultural Relics Protection Law, and then proceed from the discovery of cultural relics to the reporting process, as well as the leaks in the reporting process and the construction unit¡¯s weak awareness of cultural relics protection. The next paragraph is also similar to this topic, and then It is to emphasize the importance of cultural relics protection, and finally it is a suggestion: the protection of cultural relics should be strengthened and more professional.
Knowledge: Discovery of cultural relics must be reported to the state, and unauthorized damage is subject to legal responsibility.
A side note: The construction workers reported that it was a "grave". Although it may be one of the reasons why they could not be identified as an ancient tomb, from their cognition or vocabulary, it is indeed a "grave". He should also realize that this "grave" is unusual, so he will report it, but in the process of reporting, in his cognition, it is indeed a "grave". There is no professional expression for words such as "tomb" and "tomb", so in fact he has fulfilled his responsibility. Of course, this is just a personal understanding. (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com - Didn't finish reading? Add this book to your favoritesI'm a member and bookmarked this chapterCopy the address of this book and recommend it to your friends for pointsChapter error? Click here to report
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