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(Comments selected below are all from Guangming Times Review)
1. The forged Tsinghua admission notice was discovered, which is also a lesson of the university——
Education issues
? A brief summary of what happened and how it was discovered
The result after being discovered - the reaction of the students, the reaction of the parents, the reaction of the police. Then analyze the reasoning: the psychological pressure of the students, the timely discovery of the incident did not lead to a major mistake, and the opportunity for family members to understand each other.
A small shift from narrating events to expressing opinion content. It is equivalent to talking about the lessons learned from this incident.
Viewpoint 1. Students should correct mistakes
Viewpoint 2. Break the worship of famous schools. The object here does not specify whether it is a student, a parent, a villager, or an audience. Judging from the comments below, it should be for the general public, but from the logic of the context, it should be for students. So in fact, there should be flaws in the transition part of this article.
Viewpoint 3. Communication between married couples. Here we start with parents and the communication between parents and children.
At the end, say some good words of relief and encouragement.
Inspiration learned from it:
——In fact, a very rough framework of the writing method of comments is basically the same—a brief summary of public opinion events, public opinion points, two or three analytical points of view, suggestions or some encouraging words (anyway, they are nice words) ).
—— Regarding the issues of student education, the discussion can start from the interaction between students, parents, and students and parents. Regarding the issue of schools, the phenomenon of "worship of famous schools" is common.
2. Build roads, don't turn the village into a "slag dump"
——I don’t know why the problem is classified, so let’s temporarily define it as a large enterprise that damages the interests of the villagers——Illegal events
? The first two paragraphs describe the events
Relevant laws and regulations
The historical processing of the event, but it has not been processed well, in order to transition to the following point of view
Viewpoint 1. Potential safety hazards to villagers
Viewpoint 2. Accountability——Accountability of relevant enterprises and regulatory authorities. In such incidents involving violations of regulations, there will generally be a link of accountability.
At the end, what should I do with my duties.
Summary: This article doesn't look like a comment, the narrative accounts for almost two-thirds, and the opinions at the end are hardly opinions. This kind of article may be an article of accountability, and I don't know how to classify it at present.
Enlightenment obtained from it: Violations of regulations, or the violations of some business units that cause trouble to the public, usually use the knowledge of laws and regulations, and at the end, ask the regulatory authorities for accountability. When it comes to laws and regulations, it is estimated that I will not be able to learn this, and I don't understand the legal provisions at all.
3. The amount of compensation for unjust cases can truly reflect the value of justice
——National compensation event. This article is really well written, so a well-written comment does not lie in the framework, or even the clarity of the logic, but in the height of knowledge? After reading it, I didn't really understand what the reviewers wrote.
event. A certain director's speech ends with a one-sentence commentary, which is sharp, simple, and direct, and the commentator's attitude is direct and clear. Look, that's what a comment should look like.
Viewpoint 1. The true meaning of state compensation. State compensation has problems of ambiguity and confusion. The "director"'s speech pushed the ambiguity and confusion to the extreme, and then said that state compensation is not what it is, but what it is, clarifying the true meaning of state compensation.
Viewpoint 2. Compensation, relief, life, liberty, social values ??of justice, order. The height is too high, anyway, I probably won’t be able to write it in the future, so let it be understood, but it’s strange, this kind of theory is more like a precipitated theory, rather than a clarification of right and wrong.
Viewpoint 3. Freedom, life, and justice are priceless, how much should be compensated.
end.
The doubts I got from it: It looks very jerky, but I feel that what I said seems to make sense, but I can't grasp the height of the rise. I just don't know where the article rises from the basic point of view. This article looks a bit painful, but since someone wrote it, someone should think it is very appropriate, so where is the point that makes me feel painful? Is it the pain caused by the lack of certain knowledge, or is it a mistake that is not worth learning and recognizing?
4. Is it really happy to "accompany Lin Youyou" for 10 yuan?
——Emotional catharsis. This writing is a bit complicated. It can be seen that the knowledge of the commentators is really thick, but how should this kind of knowledge be precipitated? I don't understand.
event. The outlets sell Lin Youyou Matching service.
Some comments on this business.
Similar events.
? The reason for the appearance of the scolding product - the sense of substitution is too deep, and the emotional catharsis.
Literary and artistic works have the function of emotional catharsis.
The emotional needs of modern people. Analyze the relationship between scolding Lin Youyou and personal emotions. Something similar to scolding - it can buy love. emotional needs.
The loneliness under the Internet, and people trying to break through it.
Emotion and consumer goods. Analyzing that buying and selling can't get real feelings.
Accompanied scolding service can not get emotional catharsis.
The commercialization of human emotion. The devaluation of false emotions.
The correct way to open the emotional catharsis. The merchants set off firecrackers to resonate with the content of the drama, publicize the store, and entertain the public, which is a win-win situation. ——If there is affirmation, there will be negation, and if there is negation, there will also be affirmation, so the affirmation at the end is quite subtle.
Inspired by:
——The commentators have really accumulated a lot of news materials, and it can be seen that they have accumulated a lot of knowledge, and they have a lot of knowledge in the commercialization of emotions.
——Commercialization of emotions: People's emotional needs are cathartic, and the commercialization of emotions is becoming more and more serious. The loneliness in the Internet age and commercial emotions are false.
——Comments can also be divided into: a brief discussion of right and wrong, containing a certain amount of theoretical knowledge, and very profound theoretical articles.
——It seems that such a comment can't be written, forget it, let's read it while walking. (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com - Didn't finish reading? Add this book to your favoritesI'm a member and bookmarked this chapterCopy the address of this book and recommend it to your friends for pointsChapter error? Click here to report
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