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Jiraiya instantly entered the form of a wretched uncle.
He looked at Ye Feng expectantly.
after all.
A book that can be recognized by peers is a sacred book.
It was the first time Ye Feng saw Jiraiya¡¯s work, and she had high expectations.
but.
He found out after turning a few pages.
That's it?
That¡¯s it.
????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Out????
??How much love do you really need?
How about finding a girlfriend to sort it out?
"Mr. Zi, I didn't mean to target you. Your book is really not very good." Ye Feng shook his head with disappointment.
"Huh? Not good? Are you sure? This is a divine book!" Jiraiya looked a little confused.
"It's really not that good. Whether it's character creation or atmosphere, it reads like chewing wax."
"Although it seems to be written in an explicit way, in my opinion, this kind of writing is not very good at arousing the emotions of the perpetrators."
"To put it bluntly, a book of this style should reach a state that makes the blasphemer feel unbearable."
"But you obviously don't have this ability."
Ye Feng truthfully expressed his thoughts.
and provided guidance.
"You" Jiraiya looked like he was eating a whale, calmed down, and took out the best-selling divine book on the market, Kissing Heaven, "Then take a look at this book! "
A writer who has achieved success.
Writing a new book may not necessarily lead to success.
With this mentality.
Night Breeze enjoyed the intimacy paradise again.
But after reading it.
He threw the book back in disgust.
"That's it?"
"Mr. Zi, it's really not me who is targeting you. Your book is not as good as the one you just made."
"Looking at it this way, your book became popular only because of the power of this generation of blasphemers."
"Your writing skills are nothing short of awesome."
It¡¯s just a hot chicken
This sentence kept lingering in Jiraiya's mind.
obviously.
He has never received such a bad review!
Even those who are jealous of his colleagues would not say such vicious words!
this moment.
Jiraiya seemed to have been struck by five thunderbolts.
I, the white-haired sage Jiraiya, am one of the famous three ninjas in the southeast, northwest, and northwest, and the top performer in the ninja world.
"A Love in Heaven" made countless enemies hold the book and sit together to drink and talk.
Such an achievement.
You actually said that my writing ability is not good?
Come on, come on.
I¡¯ll give you the pen.
You big troll, write it to me!
So.
Jiraiya took Ye Breeze to a restaurant.
I simply ordered a few drinks and dishes as a cover-up.
Then.
Jiraiya took out the pen and paper.
¡°Boy, you dare to call my writing ability stupid, I¡¯ll give you the pen!
"If you can't write something serious today, I won't let you leave easily. I have to ask your parents to handle it!" "
Jiraiya crossed his arms across his chest.
He said the most terrifying words for a child.
He doesn't care about other things.
But write a book.
I, Jiraiya, am serious!
About this.
Ye Feng could only helplessly shake his head.
What is this all about?
but.
Ye Feng looked at Jiraiya thoughtfully and suddenly laughed again.
"What's the point of writing so dryly? How about the two of us take a gamble?"
"A gamble? How to bet?"
Jiraiya frowned.
He is not Tsunade, the big fat sheep of the ninja world.
He doesn¡¯t have much interest in gambling itself.
¡°I will write the beginning of three articles in a moment, and I say without any hesitation, they will definitely crush your intimacy series.
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Since my opening chapter has been criticized by youOkay, you can't just say nothing, right?
So, if I win, you have to pass on Miaomushan¡¯s psychic skills to me! "Ye Feng said slowly.
The art of channeling is a kind of time and space ninjutsu.
The ninjutsu itself is not difficult to learn.
The difficult thing is whether there are psychic beasts willing to sign a contract with the caster.
so.
Night Breeze refers specifically to Miaomu Mountain¡¯s psychic technique.
It means that Jiraiya can add his name to the contract scroll of Mt. Myoboku.
after all.
During Orochimaru's invasion of Konoha, not only were the serpents wreaking havoc, but Shukaku would also come out to cause trouble.
To deal with such large creatures.
Ordinary ninjutsu may not be very effective.
But if you can summon a psychic beast like Gamabunta, Ye Feng's strength will be greatly improved.
"Aha? You want the psychic contract from Mt. Myoboku? You, a genin brat, know a lot." Jiraiya looked at Night Breeze with a smile.
Jiraiya is not a fool.
How could he casually take Miaomushan's psychic contract as a bet?
"Let me introduce myself. My name is Yamanaka Yefeng. I am the son of the leader of the Shanzhong clan. Isn't it surprising to know about you, one of the three ninjas?" Yefeng shrugged.
"Huh? Are you Yamanaka Ye Breeze?" Jiraiya looked at Ye Breeze in surprise.
Jiraiya has already met the Third Hokage after returning to the village.
The Third Hokage also proposed to him the idea of ????letting Jiraiya help train Yamanaka Night Breeze.
But Jiraiya no longer cares much about the affairs of Konoha Village.
so.
He rejected the request of the Third Hokage.
But I never expected it.
The two of them actually met in this way again!
"Yes, it will be replaced if it's fake." Ye Feng smiled lightly.
¡°Okay, I didn¡¯t expect that Yamazaka Yefeng, who was always talked about by the old man, would actually be of the same mind as Jiraiya!
?? Okay, as long as you can write an opening chapter that convinces me, I will teach you the psychic skills of Mount Miaomu! "
Jiraiya nodded and agreed to the bet.
Talk about it.
Yefeng can be considered half of Hongdou's disciples.
???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? out of the same origin as Jiraiya.
In addition, there is also the third generation Hokage's request.
Jiraiya readily accepted the bet.
Ye Feng saw that the bet was concluded.
There was a look of satisfaction on his face.
Then.
He picked up the pen, brushed dots, and wrote down some of the plots in his memory on the paper.
for example.
What is missing is what makes it clean.
Gold is nothing.
Remember what you are in trouble for.
Although more than ten years have passed.
But those classic plots in famous online literature works.
Ye Feng always remembered it.
It only takes about one meal.
Ten thousand words, three chapters at the beginning, written.
Jiraiya reached out and took Ye Feng's first manuscript.
"Well, the title of the book is pretty good. I think he is from my generation at first glance."
"But, just a book title can't explain anything."
"After all, as the saying goes, writing novels is a dead end. Unless you have a talent like me, Jiraiya, you will never get ahead!"
Finished.
Jiraiya opened Ye Feng's manuscript and read it with a critical mood.
Ten minutes have passed.
??The beginning of the first manuscript, Jiraiya finally finished reading it.
Read it word for word.
Not even a single punctuation mark was revealed.
??For fear that it will affect the artistic conception.
"Jiraiya, how did I write at the beginning of this article?" Night Breeze lowered his head to drink and asked Jiraiya. (Remember the website address: www.hlnovel.com - Didn't finish reading? Add this book to your favoritesI'm a member and bookmarked this chapterCopy the address of this book and recommend it to your friends for pointsChapter error? Click here to report
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