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Finally it¡¯s time for the postscript.
????????????????????????????????????????????????? I always feel exhausted, and I have a lot to say but feel that I don¡¯t have the energy to say it. The postscripts in the past are not long, only a thousand words.
This one was particularly tiring because it was the longest to write
It's like running a marathon. The first half is always easier, but the second half becomes more tiring. Every meter adds to the tiredness. But this book has millions more words I really admire those who can write millions and millions of words. The macho guy is so awesome.
I really can¡¯t do it, I just want to rest.
By the way, this book is indeed my best one In terms of reputation, some people say it is not as good as the Spring and Autumn Period, and some people say it is worse than the Spring and Autumn Period. Anyway, everyone has their own tastes. There is no need to argue about this, but I am not very satisfied with it. .
It¡¯s not that there¡¯s anything wrong with the writing. The main thing is that it¡¯s not the story I originally wanted to write.
In fact, this book cannot be regarded as an upgrade stream in the true sense. It is actually a travelogue.
Once these two words came out, I wonder if many people would suddenly realize: That¡¯s it.
Before, many people said that the main line could not be seen. It is true that the main line is not very obvious, because the main line is to explore the world. Shenzhou, Netherworld, Great Wilderness, East China Sea, Beiming, and Heaven. Every time I go to a place, I will describe the local customs and construct a three-dimensional world, and then finally form Qin Yi's harvest. Thousands of lines are combined into the final creation. This is the real main line.
? ? Collecting materials for Bangbang to shape his body is just a superficial story line.
It¡¯s not about upgrading or fighting monsters, so there aren¡¯t many battles, and there¡¯s not much emphasis on rendering it, because what I want to write about isn¡¯t there.
Although it is a travelogue, it still needs a story to become a novel. What was the original story In fact, Qin Yi was just a clue to witness, to observe the stories of everyone in every place.
The original plan included many independent supporting character stories similar to Li Qinglin's, such as Electric Mouse, Jingze, Gusong Jushi and Ye Farewell, Yu Zhenren's obsession, the good and evil and ambitions of Bei Yuan and He Miao, Tian Ji Zi's conspiracy they were all thought of. It needs to be expanded to be an independent story.
??For example, if we add more ink and foreshadowing about Yuzhenren at the end, write a little more about him and his wife, and finally add some memories to highlight it, the artistic conception and emotion will definitely be stronger than now.
But people don¡¯t like to watch it. There is a high probability that during the preparation process, people will criticize me for supporting the role.
The experimental field in the first volume told me that I couldn¡¯t write it like this.
As we all know, the style of the first volume is very different from that of the later ones. The reason has also been mentioned, because the first volume was not only scolded but also had poor results - even now, every time Qidian recommends it, the recommendation effect is at the bottom in the same period. It¡¯s because of the severe dissuasion in the early stages.
There are a lot of old readers who trust me who can¡¯t stand it. Let alone new readers, the retention rate is very low.
Because it is slow to heat up and not a refreshing feeling. It's completely wrong in terms of reading expectations.
At that time, many people felt that the protagonist¡¯s brilliance was outweighed by Li Qinglin¡¯s, and their expected reading goal was to see when the protagonist would slap Li Qinglin in the face
This kind of reading expectation left me speechless, and I was not on the right track at all. You can imagine the impression I got
In addition, there are many other points, such as Qingjun's recklessness in the early stage, Minghe's awesome coaxing in the early stage, which makes people uncomfortable, Cheng Cheng's "green tea" feeling in the early stage, as well as "dog blood" and "entanglement", etc., to persuade the bully to retreat. , without waiting for the transformation or reversal of the character, it was judged as "poisonous".
Until a fire broke out, everyone discovered that the overall meaning of this volume is actually just telling a story. It is not a slap in the face, nor a bloody torture, but simply telling such a story. Everything in the previous article is just foreshadowing, so after thinking about it It feels a bit interesting At this time, the reputation of the whole volume was brought back, but it was too late. People who left could not come back, and they could not see this.
This is a situation where the long-term foreshadowing writing method is incompatible with today's online reading expectations. At least my "godhead" is not enough to support people's patience. I am afraid that I have to reach the level of Cuttlefish Beacon. I am indeed much worse.
So we can only start to adjust the writing method.
The overall outline of the story has not changed, but the expression and writing methods have changed. In fact, it is a matter of emphasis on writing. Just like the first volume that focused on Li Qinglin, everything was reduced and the focus was on Qin Yi himself and his women. I won¡¯t press the places that should be ¡°pressed¡±. If there are no twists and turns, then there will be no twists and turns. After all, I don¡¯t write hard just to find criticism.
The encounter between the small town¡¯s obscene temple and Jingze was the final transition point in style. Part of the artistic conception continued until the first time I met the senior sister.
The subsequent plot has not changed, the focus isThe harem online novels not only require the female characters to be outstanding, but some people are dissatisfied with the fact that the electric mouse is just a tool, saying that it can only write about women and not enough characters I really can't figure out how this requirement came about.
? Could it be that the heroine is not a character? If others don't have a female protagonist and depict a few supporting male characters, the group portrait is awesome. If we portray a dozen female characters and don't have any words for the supporting male characters, does that mean we haven't portrayed the characters?
There are also requests that the heroine cannot be unable to stand up to everyone in the later period. I was thinking that even the colorful Shi Jin and Wu Song in the early stage of Water Margin didn't have much performance in the later stage. Why is it that a mere harem online novel requires the characters in the early stage to be as exciting in the later stage?
There are only so many character plots, no matter if you are male or female, after the exciting paragraphs are over, you will naturally not be outstanding all the time. Isn¡¯t this common sense? Can you just do your best if you don't share a little role from time to time?
We are really just writing a few thousand words of online articles every day. We are not writing something beyond the classics, and it is impossible to reach that level.
Can you not mention some requirements that go beyond human limits?
Now that harem literature is so difficult to navigate, not only are there no tolerance, but they are becoming more harsh. I really find it strange.
This is an appeal, please be more tolerant and gentle
¡°Hmm¡it doesn¡¯t make any sense, and no one listens to my appeal. Some people say that I am the one carrying the flag in the harem. I was so busy that I quickly took off the flag. I really couldn¡¯t afford it. When I was reported, I was as dazzling as a target. When I was in high demand, I held a magnifying glass, but my grades were lower than others. Several times lower.
There is a buddy in the quagmire who said that newspaper sellers should carry the flag now, so hurry up and take over, thank you, good man, my writing skills are really not good, so let the newspaper sellers with strong writing skills bear this heavy honor.
Unexpectedly, the postscript of this time is more than the number of words in the authentic article It is too long cough, the negative energy is too heavy, and it is not very good.
I am still sincerely grateful to most of the brothers for their continued support, otherwise I would have died long ago.
Now let me rest first
When I used to work part-time, I would take a break for half a year. Now that I have to work full-time, I can¡¯t be so willful This time I will take a break of about two or three months (including the time to structure the new book). The next book will be in September at the earliest and mid-October at the latest. , October is more likely.
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