So far, I have written 100 chapters and 200,000 words.
There were many shortcomings during this period, and book friends also pointed them out. I will try my best to correct what I can.
In response to your question, I will give you a rough explanation.
First of all, many people asked why they didn¡¯t go looking for food after traveling for a month and only went to make money when they had no money.
You must know what kind of world the protagonist travels to. It is an ancient world that foreshadows demons and ghosts. He does not understand the language, can read and write traditional Chinese characters, and does not know the ancient means of making a living. How can he make money?
??And the top priority at that time, shouldn't it be to practice cultivation as soon as possible and strive to have the power to protect yourself, and then think about other things?
Once you have strength, money is not something you can easily get.
So when he saw that the Yang Mansion was recruiting talented people, Lu Li happened to have the strength, so he went to pick up the list, and then got the money.
What is this core?
The core is strength. If Lu Li doesn't practice for a month, where will he get the strength?
And if he goes to work, where will he have time to practice?
It doesn¡¯t matter whether you can find a job or not
As for why you don¡¯t have to spend money to eat steamed buns, you should instead eat luxuries like wonton noodles.
First of all, in my setting, cultivation requires essence, and essence must be extracted from meat.
Therefore, eating steamed buns cannot replenish the consumption of cultivation.
Maybe I didn¡¯t make it clear before, so everyone has a misunderstanding, so I¡¯ll reiterate it here
The next thing is why the spider demon is judged to be an entire demon clan through its demonic aura.
This is a guess.
The protagonist doesn¡¯t know whether it¡¯s a demon or a group of demons, but in that case, of course he¡¯s thinking in the worst direction.
So it is possible that the original text I wrote is possible.
possible
Then there is the problem that the protagonist is too timid.
First of all, we must understand that the protagonist is an ordinary person, and everyone is afraid of death. Can a completely reckless man really be reckless all the way to the end?
You said that the protagonist has a golden finger to kill monsters and get gray energy.
But what if Lu Li is so reckless that he suddenly encounters a big monster, a ghost king, and cannot defeat him?
Was he killed directly?
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This may be fun, but I can¡¯t write it.
Therefore, the protagonist is very cautious in some aspects. For example, when painting a ghost in the Qian Mansion, he first uses the speed of light to spy, and only after confirming that he can win, he finally enters the scene.
? ? Personally I think this is prudent.
If you insist on thinking that this is cowardice, then there is nothing I can do about it
?Then there is the issue of water.
I don¡¯t know how you identify water, but I like to take my time when writing, speak straightforwardly, and introduce the following bit by bit.
It may be that the preparation was too long and seemed too bland, so you felt it was watery.
Maybe it¡¯s really water.
So today I reflected on it and decided not to do so much foreshadowing or buffering, and just started the plot directly
Regarding the plot of Yin Qian, I want to make it clear that it is not about pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. It is just that Lu Li suddenly saw a fight between humans and ghosts and won. He was shocked and just observed it. It is not about pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger.
I also don¡¯t like to write about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger.
I write very plainly, and I can¡¯t write passionate fights. You should be able to tell that the fights I write are very crude.
Some pretending plots can not be written much, but just writing stories, very flat
I saw someone arguing about writing in the comment area. Let me explain here. My writing is very poor. It is indeed very poor. There is nothing I cannot admit.
"There's nothing bad to say. I have a low education level and graduated from junior high school. It's normal for my writing to be poor. You think it's okay to have poor writing.
So you say I am a junior high school student, and you are right, I am indeed a junior high school student.
The reason why I write novels is because I love them. I started reading novels ten years ago. After reading them for a long time, I naturally wanted to write one myself.
I also want to earn some perfect attendance. After all, although the starting point of 600 yuan is not much, it can still buy two cigarettes
Having said so much, I have pretty much said what needs to be said. I admit that my writing is poor. If you don¡¯t like it, you can delete the book.
& nbsp; I'm sorry for letting you waste your time reading a bad book, but my level is limited, that's all.
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I really don¡¯t want to delete the comment.
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