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    You can search "I am Supreme" in Baidu to find the latest chapter!

    It took more than a month to finish this testimonial, which is a bit late.

    But there are some things that I need to explain to everyone.

    I wrote this book very passionately at the beginning.

    ? Defending the family and defending the country, the nine respects; I am also very excited to write.

    But since when I feel something is wrong.

    This book, in some senses, is high and low.

    At the beginning, the tone was set, too grand.  Just like one day I said in a chapter that I was arguing with several book friends: You have been a soldier yourself, but we have not.  We read books for happiness, but you insist on pulling us to shout slogans together, we don't feel good.

    Yes, I don't believe it, there are still people who are not patriotic.  But the book friends are right, we are all patriotic, but we don't want to read a book and shout slogans It's not good.

    And the subscription situation is also reminding me that there must be some places where the point is not selected correctly.

    At that time, the whole book had already taken shape.

    Then I was thinking, change it.

    Then the website came to me and said, the contract is about to expire, but your word count is quite short.

    This made me feel uncomfortable.

    The word count problem is a big problem.

    Then I started to bury the thread while changing, burying the thread of the Xuanhuang Realm; and then intervened with the fantasy world.  It's a pity that I only made the outline of the Profound Sky Continent before I started the book; no matter how much I pour water, I can write three million It's not enough.

    So the first half is family and country; the second half is pure fantasy.

    But this change I found that I made another mistake: Many readers who have been following the reading are not happy: your blood is boiling, why are you going to upgrade and fight monsters

    I was stunned for a while.

    Bite the bullet and keep writing.

    Finally, I finished writing.

    But the real biggest mistake is not here yet.

    That is the issue of Yun Yang's identity.

    It was too early to reveal it!

    Everyone, take a look, I'm sorry, Mo Tianji's son so he can still die?  How could Mo Shengun let his son die?

    Therefore, the biggest suspense and the most worrying life-and-death crisis of the protagonist, being exposed by this identity makes the sense of crisis disappear at all!

    It took a month after I finished writing that paragraph before I woke up and slapped myself seven or eight times: What did you think, you are an idiot

    Many readers responded to me, saying: Some of them are boring to read.

    This is really not boring, because Mo Tianji is so awesome.

    These encounters, replaced by any protagonist, are very worrying.  However, after revealing his identity, Yun Yang can't do it!

    It's so safe!

    Big mistake.

    Finish writing with the most serious attitude; however, the flaws brought about by Yun Yang's identity can never be eliminated!

    This is the biggest failure of this book.

    After finishing writing, I have learned from the painful experience, and I can't make such low-level mistakes again in the next book.

    Thank you all for your company and generosity all the way.

    I can't finish writing the free chapters, so I will post them first, and then I will continue to write.  (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com
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