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"Very good. Now I feel full of energy, full of fighting spirit, and full of confidence to return to the original state. I will work hard!"
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The two brothers and sisters walked out of the teahouse, it is now past eight o'clock in the morning.
As for Li Luoqing's oath and fighting spirit, Yu Zhile couldn't complain. The person who should work hard is him, the guardian! You are clearly enjoying the list!
"Then, let's fulfill the eighth wish first." Li Luo looked over at the wish list in his hand.
"What is Article 8?" Yu Zhile asked curiously.
"Want to sit on Dad's shoulders!"
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Yu Zhile said speechlessly: "I think you should change this wish. Uncle, I can't take you there and ride on his neck."
"Then we can find a substitute." Li Luoqing looked at him with fiery eyes.
"Do you want me to be your father?"
"roll!"
Li Luoqing punched him, "I mean brother can do it too. After all, I have already experienced riding on my father's neck, but I haven't tried riding on my brother's neck."
"Sister, I am the younger brother, I am the stinky younger brother."
"No, no, you are my brother, you are my good brother."
Li Luoqing took his hand and acted like a baby, clucking like a little hen that just laid an egg.
Passers-by around looked over curiously, thinking to themselves that such a lovely sister, what request could my brother not grant? This must be an excessive brother.
"All right, all right, I've convinced you."
"Quickly squat down."
Yu Zhile had no choice but to squat down, and the little Lolita awkwardly climbed onto his shoulders, with her short legs straddling his neck, feeling extremely excited.
"Let's go! Zhile!"
"I want to throw you into the lotus pond."
"you dare."
Yu Zhile took her two short hands, and when she sat down firmly, he stood up.
"Wow! Hahaha! So tall!!"
Li Luoqing giggled happily, this is really a long time since the vague childhood memory, and once again experienced this feeling, as if sitting on the shoulders of a giant.
When Yu Zhile stood up, there was wind in her ears, and her vision rose rapidly.
Originally, with her height of 1.1 meters, she could only see the waist of pedestrians when looking at her head-up, but now she can easily see whether there is dandruff on the top of the other person's head.
"Zhile, are you the Pearl of the Orient? Why are you so tall at 1.83 meters?"
"You are short yourself."
"I'm not short at 1.7 meters, okay!"
Sitting on his shoulders, Li Luoqing's field of vision rose to more than two meters, and he felt that even the air he breathed was much fresher.
Yu Zhile took her little short hand, and she sat firmly. As he walked around, Li Luoqing felt more and more amused.
After all, she is just a little one, so it is not tiring to carry her on her back like this, but the little Lolita is obviously not at ease. Yu Zhile feels that she is riding a horse, and sometimes instructs him to go to the lotus pond to see lotus flowers, and then asks him to stand higher. Picking mangoes on the side of the road.
"Go buy mango pudding, my sixth wish is to eat a lot of mango pudding."
"Then let's get to the next street?"
"It's fine if you carry me on your back."
Yu Zhile hates children!
After a while, she finally had enough of her child addiction, and when she got on the elevator, the elevator door was not as high as her, so she had no choice but to get down.
"Interesting and interesting! My sister feels that the progress of recovery has reached 1%!"
"Can you stop saying it to hit me?"
"Isn't this a very happy thing?"
"Tell me when you are ninety-nine."
Yu Zhile was tired, and thought about whether it would be like downloading a movie, stuck at ninety-nine and then he couldn't move, so he was even more tired.
Back home, Yu Zhile took out her wish list: "Then you can clean up now, and when I come back, I will give you a good compliment."
"There is no rush, eat mango pudding and watch cartoons all day first."
"Then brother has gone to work first, so you stay at home and take good care of the house."
"Bye-Bye."
"You eat less cold food, and you will have diarrhea later."
"But my wish is to eat a lot."
Li Luoqing sits cross-leggedChapter 1, how about you first write about the heroine taking advantage of the time to stop spoiling the hero? "
With just a few dials from Yu Zhile, Xia Zhenyue immediately became enlightened.
"It seems that if you say it like this, the writing is smoother! There are a lot of suspense, what is going on with the time stop, why the heroine ruined the hero, etc., I feel that the readers will look forward to the following things!"
"Yes, this is to use the sense of anticipation to improve the sense of reading."
Yu Zhile continued to analyze with her the plot setting of the first three chapters in detail. Regarding the writing and description, he asked himself that he was not as good as Xia Zhenyue, but she was not good enough in creating a sense of expectation. effort.
"We can put these things in the back and talk about them, including the life experience of the heroine, the identity of the hero, etc"
"Then how to improve this sense of expectation?"
"Desire, confrontation, and escape can be summarized into these three basic event models."
Yu Zhile gave an example: "For example, if an old man is fishing, why are there people watching? This is a simple desire model. The audience wonders whether the old man's desire to catch fish can be realized; another example is two people playing chess. There are also crowds of onlookers, who are equally curious about the outcome of the game between the two; for example, when a cat falls into the sewer, and a poisonous snake swims towards it, the crowd of onlookers are also curious about whether it will get out of trouble; Based on the event model, we will use this as a foreshadowing to set off the atmosphere to make a fuss"
"Uh-huh¡¡"
Yu Zhile taught her some of her own experience in writing, and Xia Zhenyue listened carefully.
Talented people don't need to teach her in detail, let alone Yu Zhile teach her how to write word by word. She has her own way of writing. He only needs to give the general idea, and Xia Zhenyue can grasp it by herself. Living.
I have also read a lot of novels these days. Xia Zhenyue can understand some of the mysteries in them, but she has not summarized them systematically. Yu Zhile's guidance can save her many, many detours.
The two of them were studying, getting closer and closer, until finally Yu Zhile stopped looking at her own computer and looked at the same screen as her.
The little hands in the middle were hidden under the table, and the two were lying on the table and chatting quietly, the distance between them was so close that they could smell each other's breath.
Sometimes the examples given by Yu Zhile are interesting, and Xia Zhenyue will be amused or embarrassed by him, give him a big white look with big eyes, or lightly purse her lips with a smile, obviously studying seriously, making it seem like she is talking about husband and wife Like sweet talk.
"How many words are you going to write?"
"Well, it's estimated to be two to three hundred thousand words."
"Okay, I think your writing style and writing style are suitable for the copyright route. When the time comes, I will help you contact the editor at Haitang, and submit your manuscript for review."
"Do you want to write the whole book first?"
"No, let's write 20,000 words first, the first book, let's try it first, but I think your writing is very good."
"Um."
"Did you wash your hair last night?" Yu Zhile sniffed the air lightly.
She blushed slightly, nodded, and then came to her senses, their faces were very close to each other
"Then I'll go back first, I may not be in the store this afternoon, I have to go to practice, and I have to take the second test."
"Uh-huh¡¡"
Hearing that he was not there, Xia Zhenyue's eyes showed a trace of loss.
"Do you know what a gentleman is?"
"Gentleman?"
Yu Zhile got up, looked outside, then squeezed her four delicate fingers, quickly lowered her head, and kissed the back of her hand.
His lips were soft, and the moist feeling stayed on the back of her hand.
"You smell super fragrant today."
After saying this, he gave a gentlemanly salute, and walked away with his computer in his arms contentedly.
Having ruined someone's daughter, the villain still greeted his mother calmly, and the mother said that he would come to play when he was free
Xia Zhenyue is stupid.
Staring blankly at the back of his hand in a daze for a long time, light blue blood vessels were faintly visible on the fair skin, and the place he kissed was a bit wet and cold
Slowly, she put her lips on it.
Can't do this again next time
Be a lady
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