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Chapter 999 I Will Write It

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    Gu Yundong's eyes flicked in front of the four of them one by one, and after a while, he said in a low voice, "Then Ispeak directly?"

    "Let's talk."

    Even Shao Qingyuan looked at her eagerly. He himself thought the idea was not bad, but if Yun Dong said no, he would quickly think about it.

    Gu Yundong coughed lightly, "The story is okay, it's just written like this, it's not attractive enough."

    Prefect Dai hurriedly leaned forward, "Where is it not enough?"

    "Uncle, our story is mainly for the common people. Most of the common people are illiterate. Even if they do, they can't understand the words that are too esoteric. Especially these verses, we can understand them, but the common people may not understand them.  Understand."

    Well, the story, of course, should be simple, straightforward, and well-mannered, that's just a fuss.

    "In that case, it makes sense."

    Dai Zhifu nodded slightly, and then heard Gu Yundong continue, "After all, this storybook is different from the article. In addition to being rigorous in logic, the most important thing in the storybook is to set up suspense to catch people's attention and make people wonder about the next story.  There are speculations and expectations about the plot. And the first sentence is especially important, it is best to be concise and straightforward, to hit the theme directly, the rhetoric is too gorgeous, and people will fall asleep after listening to it."

    Dai Zhifu, who felt that his first sentence was written wonderfully, ""

    Shao Qingyuan felt that Dai Zhifu wrote much better than himself, ""

    Madam Dai and Mr. Dai felt that the first sentence would definitely make the emperor happy, ""

    This first sentence seems, indeed, not concise enough.

    Prefect Dai felt that he had been hit. He took the few pieces of paper, and after looking at them, he suddenly felt dull.

    He is also a person who can really listen to the words, and immediately asked humbly, "Then, in your opinion, how should I write it?"

    Devinhuo said, "None of us are good at writing scripts. How about finding a scholar who is good at writing scripts?"

    Gu Yundong waved his hand, "No need. I'll write it. You can read it after I write it out. If it doesn't work, let's find someone else to try it."

    Anyway, she is someone who has read so many novels and stories. This story is not long, and she is good at catching people's attention.

    "Okay, then you write first."

    Mrs. Dai glanced at a few people, "What should I write? Have a meal first, and then there will be time to write again."

    Really, everyone is discussing and forgetting to be hungry, right?

    She hurriedly asked the servants to put the meals on the table, and invited Yun Dong to eat first.

    Gu Yundong ate and conceived in his mind, the others were silent, and the speed was very fast, and they finished eating in a short time.

    Not long after Gu Yundong finished his meal, he took the papers and went into the study.

    No one bothered her, let her write slowly by herself, and they continued to discuss the next process.

    Gu Yundong thought for a while while holding the pen, and finally wrote the first sentence on the paper.

    "By the way, some time ago, a great event happened in the capital"

    Gu Yundong is not a professional writer either, but at least it is more like a script than what Dai Zhifu wrote, and it is more enjoyable to listen to.

    She moved quickly. Anyway, there is a sample of Dai Zhifu. She changed the way of writing a little bit, adjusted the order of front and back, and deleted all the nonsense that praised the merits, leaving a suspense at the end, and it was done.

    Gu Yundong put down his pen, blew on the ink, and walked out the door of the study with a few pages of paper.  (Remember the site URL: www.hlnovel.com
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