Jiraiya hasn't started reading Naruto's opening chapter yet.
In his mind, various things that need attention have already emerged.
for example.
Like why there can't be too many characters in the first chapter.
Conflicts must appear in the first three chapters.
There must be a pretentious face.
If it is the type of writing about Qinre Paradise.
The harem must be opened from beginning to end!
And.
There must be more character styles!
The posture must be rich.
So.
Jilai also sat beside Naruto.
Pick up the first chapter written by Naruto.
Read it with a critical mood
The clock made a ticking sound.
soon.
Jilai has also read the first chapter written by Naruto word by word.
He looked at Naruto.
I looked at the novel in my hand again.
His hands seemed to tremble uncontrollably.
at the same time.
He swallowed.
The expression became a little ugly.
"Uh Narudo please allow me to go out for a while, and I will come back later to discuss writing novels with you!"
Whoosh!
Jiraiya's figure suddenly disappeared.
Naruto was slightly taken aback when he saw this.
"Whatwhy did you just leave? Could it be that the novel my uncle gave me happens to be the kind that the good fairy doesn't like? It shouldn't be? The good fairy is obviously very mature?"
After half an hour.
Ji Lai also dragged his tired body back to the hotel again.
at this time.
Naruto wasn't asleep yet.
Because he must wait for the feedback from Jiraiya.
This is like.
One rushes to write books every day.
But no one left a message.
Don't mention how uncomfortable that feeling is!
After Zilai also walked into the room.
There was an eager look on his face.
"Narudo! Very good! Your opening chapter is very good! You are indeed my disciple of Jiraiya! I really did not expect that you have such a high talent in this area at such a young age! Amazing !"
Listening to Jiraiya's voice of praise.
Naruto finally showed a satisfied smile.
It seems.
Uncle's strategy should have worked.
"By the way, NarudoI've been away for so longHave you written the second chapter yet?" Ji Lai also seemed to hesitate for a moment, but he still asked.
Naruto smiled slightly.
Seeing Zilai, he was really hooked.
He sighed.
"No, it's really difficult to write this thing, and I can only wait until tomorrow to write the second chapter!"
Jilai also heard Naruto's answer.
A trace of disappointment appeared on his face.
But there was also a hint of ease.
Naruto didn't understand either.
Does he hope that he will change today or not?
but.
No matter what the other party thinks.
Today there is only one update!
This is what my uncle said!
"Wellit doesn't matter. After all, you are just a child! It's not easy to write such a book! It's amazing to update it every day!"
After Jiraiya finished speaking, he seemed to revisit the content written in the first chapter, and said: "Although your first chapter is very enjoyable for me to read, it must be difficult for you in the process of creation! As your Comrades, I understand."
Zilai also comforted Naruto, and then touched his nose.
"However You must continue to work hard tomorrow. The most important thing in writing a book is persistence. You must not waste your talent!"
After instructing Naruto.
Jiraiya also made another decision.
"I think it should be like this! Looking for Tsunade, I can do it myself in the future. You don't need to rub the balls, you just stay in the room and write a book! This is more important than being a ninja. There are so many futures!" (Remember this site website.??: www.hlnovel.com